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| Which type sounds Better? | | The Sad | | 50% | [ 2 ] | | The Happy | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | The -ish | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | The poems that are just there | | 50% | [ 2 ] |
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Emerald Super Speedy Vampire

 Joined : 12 Apr 2008 Posts : 166 Regular Points :
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| Subject: Hiding Away.... Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:07 pm | |
| This is another one I don't remember writing.
I don't socialize, I keep to myself. The world doesn't realize, that I am not like them. I stare out my window, and wish I could see the grass, feel the warmth of the sun on my face, smell the clean air of the world. But I can't. I am doomed to hide away.... Doomed to never capture the scent of flowers, never to taste a breath of fresh air, not to feel the wind, rain, or sun. I am hiding from the world.
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Hazel Member of the Month


   Age : 14 Joined : 03 Apr 2008 Posts : 297 Regular Points :
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| Subject: Re: Hiding Away.... Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:08 pm | |
| You hermit....just kidding. that was kinda sad... But it was very good  _________________ This is from Hazel the Brilliant
Friends stab you in the back, boys stab you in the heart, and best friends don't carry knives If guns are outlawed only outlaws will have guns Even a broken clock is right twice a day Its all fun and games 'till someone gets hurt, then its hilarious! |
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Emerald Super Speedy Vampire

 Joined : 12 Apr 2008 Posts : 166 Regular Points :
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| Subject: Re: Hiding Away.... Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:09 pm | |
| Its not about me!!!!  |
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Hazel Member of the Month


   Age : 14 Joined : 03 Apr 2008 Posts : 297 Regular Points :
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| Subject: Re: Hiding Away.... Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:12 pm | |
| I know, hence the just kidding part!!! _________________ This is from Hazel the Brilliant
Friends stab you in the back, boys stab you in the heart, and best friends don't carry knives If guns are outlawed only outlaws will have guns Even a broken clock is right twice a day Its all fun and games 'till someone gets hurt, then its hilarious! |
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Emerald Super Speedy Vampire

 Joined : 12 Apr 2008 Posts : 166 Regular Points :
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| Subject: Re: Hiding Away.... Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:23 pm | |
| Ok....  |
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Moonlite Knight Super Strong Vampire

   Age : 18 Joined : 30 Mar 2008 Posts : 247 Regular Points :
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| Subject: Re: Hiding Away.... Tue Apr 29, 2008 10:26 pm | |
| That was really times infinity good! I liked it. The sad part is that there are many people who feel that way, and only some ever grow past that feeling. Anyway, that wa really good. And you don;t remeber writing it? Are you sure you weren;t possessed by a lonely ghost who used your hands to convey to the world hoe he/she felt at the time of his/her death? Kidding! _________________
Now you see him, now you don't Run Issac, run! Proud member of HEAT, Moderators Group, and Royal Friends |
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Emerald Super Speedy Vampire

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| Subject: Re: Hiding Away.... Tue May 06, 2008 7:16 pm | |
| | oh, i'm sure. |
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Moonlite Knight Super Strong Vampire

   Age : 18 Joined : 30 Mar 2008 Posts : 247 Regular Points :
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| Subject: Re: Hiding Away.... Wed May 07, 2008 7:36 pm | |
| lol, I'm just kidding  _________________
Now you see him, now you don't Run Issac, run! Proud member of HEAT, Moderators Group, and Royal Friends |
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Emerald Super Speedy Vampire

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| Subject: Re: Hiding Away.... Wed May 07, 2008 11:03 pm | |
| Lol.  |
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Hazel Member of the Month


   Age : 14 Joined : 03 Apr 2008 Posts : 297 Regular Points :
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| Subject: Re: Hiding Away.... Wed May 07, 2008 11:18 pm | |
| Wahahaha, actually possesed people don't usually know they are possesed...... _________________ This is from Hazel the Brilliant
Friends stab you in the back, boys stab you in the heart, and best friends don't carry knives If guns are outlawed only outlaws will have guns Even a broken clock is right twice a day Its all fun and games 'till someone gets hurt, then its hilarious! |
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Moonlite Knight Super Strong Vampire

   Age : 18 Joined : 30 Mar 2008 Posts : 247 Regular Points :
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| Subject: Re: Hiding Away.... Wed May 07, 2008 11:34 pm | |
| Hmm... Are you sure about that?  _________________
Now you see him, now you don't Run Issac, run! Proud member of HEAT, Moderators Group, and Royal Friends |
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Hazel Member of the Month


   Age : 14 Joined : 03 Apr 2008 Posts : 297 Regular Points :
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| Subject: Re: Hiding Away.... Thu May 08, 2008 9:46 pm | |
| Well not 100% sure but lets just say 98% sure. Or at least they may know that something is wrong with them but they don't know what....... _________________ This is from Hazel the Brilliant
Friends stab you in the back, boys stab you in the heart, and best friends don't carry knives If guns are outlawed only outlaws will have guns Even a broken clock is right twice a day Its all fun and games 'till someone gets hurt, then its hilarious! |
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Emerald Super Speedy Vampire

 Joined : 12 Apr 2008 Posts : 166 Regular Points :
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   (2/100) Characters Savioria: The Cullens: The Volturi: Ronnel
| Subject: Re: Hiding Away.... Sun May 11, 2008 4:24 pm | |
| | Exactly. |
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