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Which type sounds Better?
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PostSubject: Hiding Away....   Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:07 pm

This is another one I don't remember writing.

I don't socialize,
I keep to myself.
The world doesn't realize,
that I am not like them.
I stare out my window,
and wish I could see the grass,
feel the warmth of the sun on my face,
smell the clean air of the world.
But I can't.
I am doomed to hide away....
Doomed to never capture the scent of flowers,
never to taste a breath of fresh air,
not to feel the wind, rain, or sun.
I am hiding from the world.


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PostSubject: Re: Hiding Away....   Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:08 pm

You hermit....just kidding. that was kinda sad... Crying or Very sad But it was very good bounce
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If guns are outlawed only outlaws will have guns
Even a broken clock is right twice a day
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding Away....   Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:09 pm

Its not about me!!!! geek
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding Away....   Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:12 pm

I know, hence the just kidding part!!!
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Friends stab you in the back, boys stab you in the heart, and best friends don't carry knives
If guns are outlawed only outlaws will have guns
Even a broken clock is right twice a day
Its all fun and games 'till someone gets hurt, then its hilarious!
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding Away....   Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:23 pm

Ok.... Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding Away....   Tue Apr 29, 2008 10:26 pm

That was really times infinity good! I liked it. The sad part is that there are many people who feel that way, and only some ever grow past that feeling. Anyway, that wa really good. And you don;t remeber writing it? Are you sure you weren;t possessed by a lonely ghost who used your hands to convey to the world hoe he/she felt at the time of his/her death? Very Happy Kidding!
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding Away....   Tue May 06, 2008 7:16 pm

oh, i'm sure.
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding Away....   Wed May 07, 2008 7:36 pm

lol, I'm just kidding Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding Away....   Wed May 07, 2008 11:03 pm

Lol. LOL
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding Away....   Wed May 07, 2008 11:18 pm

Wahahaha, actually possesed people don't usually know they are possesed......
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Friends stab you in the back, boys stab you in the heart, and best friends don't carry knives
If guns are outlawed only outlaws will have guns
Even a broken clock is right twice a day
Its all fun and games 'till someone gets hurt, then its hilarious!
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding Away....   Wed May 07, 2008 11:34 pm

Hmm... Are you sure about that? Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding Away....   Thu May 08, 2008 9:46 pm

Well not 100% sure but lets just say 98% sure. Or at least they may know that something is wrong with them but they don't know what.......
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This is from Hazel the Brilliant

Friends stab you in the back, boys stab you in the heart, and best friends don't carry knives
If guns are outlawed only outlaws will have guns
Even a broken clock is right twice a day
Its all fun and games 'till someone gets hurt, then its hilarious!
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Emerald
Super Speedy Vampire


Gender:Female
Joined : 12 Apr 2008
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding Away....   Sun May 11, 2008 4:24 pm

Exactly.
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